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Objective
My objective is to obtain a job in the fashion industry as a buyer or visual merchandiser from which I can evolve into a career.
Education
-Main Campus
Bachelor of Science
Consumer Science and Merchandising Houston, TX
Expected Graduation December 2008
§ Courses pertaining to my degree aside from core curriculum
§ Fall 2007: Merchandising Systems, Consumer Science and Merchandising, Consumer Science
§ Summer 2007: Visual Merchandising, Entrepreneurship, Research Concepts
§ Spring 2007: Leadership and Supervision
-Central
Associates
Fashion Merchandising
Graduated December 2006 Houston, TX
§ Fall 2006: Visual Merchandising, Internship as assistant stylist for fashion shows, photo shots, etc.
§ Spring 2006: Fashion Production, Fashion Imaging/Styling
§ Fall 2005: Fashion study tour in France, Fashion Retailing, Fashion Buying
§ Summer 2005:Ready to Wear, Fashion Advertising
§ Spring 2005:Supervision, Marketing
§ Fall 2004:Textiles, Fashion Selling, Apparel Computer Systems, Photography
§ Summer 2004:Intro to Fashion, Fashion Trends
§ Spring 2004:Fashion History, Art for Fashion, Fashion Sketching
Experience
September 2007-Present Bookkeeper Houston, TX
Main objective is to collect and track client payments through QuickBooks. Create, mail, and follow up on invoices sent to our clients so that their retainers and fees are paid on time. Other tasks performed on a daily basis include heavy amounts of filing/Xerox/fax/phones/data entry into ACT. I am also responsible for paying office and attorneys bills, scheduling clients for meetings/mediations/etc., and light legal document processing from drafting to mailing.
September 2005 – May 2006 RSR Houston, TX
Responsibilities as RSR consist of providing the best customer service by assisting customers with any questions/concerns they have regarding our services or phones. Other tasks performed on daily basis are floor counts/inventory, operating a till/register, and selling both rate plans or phones. Light Data Entry/Fax/Xerox/File/Answer Phones.
January 2005 – May 2005 Teaching Assistant Houston, TX
Responsibilities as T.A. consisted of controlling behavior, teaching, observing, finding and creating new projects/lessons. Other tasks performed were creating a concept, executing it into a visual display in the classroom as well as the bulletin boards.
September 2001 – May 2002 Bilingual Clerk/Aide Houston, TX
Responsibilities as Aide/Clerk consisted mainly of data entry into SASI, fax, xerox, file all paper work, schedule/prepare ARD meetings, translate, and assist as needed by staff/parents/students. Other duties assigned were creating visual boards and cover sheets.
Skills
 Fluent Spanish
 50+wpm
 Microsoft Office: Excel, Word, Access, PowerPoint, etc.
 QuickBooks
 ACT
 Photoshop